Poem: Flowers of Eden- Hear me! Help me!

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By pinkhawk

photos from Ms. Eloisa Suiton

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Hear me! Oh hear me!-

Flowers of Eden!

Make my senseless thoughts be vanished.

Refresh it with your colorful beauty,

Part of your innocence-

Oh please share me!


Let your fragrance embraced me,

'Til it enters my veins.

Let my body sway as you dance gracefully

Together with the reckless wind.

Hear me! Oh hear me!


Share me your dreams,

Your genuine cry

Enough to catch anyone in a spell

Cast a spell to me!


Make me forget the pain of fighting,

My weaknesses...

My doubts...

My confusions...

My sorrows...

Even just for a while.


But...

hoping it will last!

'Til I become strong

'Til I recover my energy

My brave from nothingness

And conquer my fears.

Hear me! Oh hear me!


Wake me up! Wake me up!

From the night im escaping

Let me hold the thorns encircling your stem

Just to pull me out from the darkness teasing me

Oh help me! Help me!


Flowers of Eden

Please! Let me sleep

In the bed of your peacefulness.

Enchant me with the music of your dreams

And let me stay in your stainless heart


Oh hear me! Hear me!

Oh help me! Help me!

There are times in life when we are so depressed, not knowing what to do, can't find someone to talk to and thinking that we are alone, useless and hopeless. Everything seemed worst.

With these things, our spirit weakens. So instead of having these negative thoughts, why not just focus on things to uplift our spirit? Sometimes we can find a refuge in mother nature. We can share our agony and let her hear our plea, our cry...until the scent of its flowers caress and wipe our tears.

Always remember God made all things with a purpose so cheer up!!!

Appreciate things around and be happy! :)

Comments

prasetio30 profile image

prasetio30 Level 8 Commenter 2 years ago

great poems. thanks for share.

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D.A.L. 2 years ago

I could not agree more with your final comments. You may like to visit my hub local lakes an oasis of tranquility.

great poem. fantastic photographs.

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Moulik Mistry 2 years ago

I hear your soulful cry...

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Dim Flaxenwick Level 7 Commenter 2 years ago

That was lovely. Thank you.

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warrioRR 2 years ago

I love to read it agian

Great work

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Joy56 Level 3 Commenter 24 months ago

that was almost like one of the Psalms written by David, pleading to god for help. It was very well written, and moving, and your choice of pictures....... beautiful.

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pinkhawk Hub Author 24 months ago

...thank you all for dropping by and leaving a comment, I really appreciate it and these comments serve as one of my inspirations! thanks again..^.^!

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niallmarkey 24 months ago

Very beautiful poem! Inspirational and moving.

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pinkhawk Hub Author 24 months ago

hello Sir!^.^... thank you very much for the comment! :)

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epigramman 23 months ago

Well like the art and beauty of flowers we can now add the thrill of your hubs - so fine so righteous so pure so divine so you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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pinkhawk Hub Author 22 months ago

hello Sir epigramman! ^.^ thank you verryy muccchh for appreciating this!

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